Thursday 7 April 2011

Progress Report Table (week 3)

Week
Wk 3, 4 April.
What we aim to complete?
1. Decide on the storybook outline
·         Choose either one or combine them.
2. Make a draft of the story
·         State which events would be used
3. Setting
·         How many settings there will be
·         Sketches to be done
4. Characters
·         Which characters there will be
·         Physical traits of the characters
·         Have options or decide which to do on
·         Sketches
What we have completed?
1. Decide on the storybook outline
2. Make a draft of the story
3. Setting
·         classroom
·          army camp
·         home
4. Characters
·         sun-hee
·          tae-yul
What have we NOT completed?
NIL


Draft 1, Sketch of setting (Classroom)

classroom

Draft 1, Sketches of characters (Tae-yul & Sun-hee)

Sketch of tae-yul

Sketche of sun-hee


< FINALISED > Outline & Draft 1, Rhyming text

This shall be the finalised outline of the picture book. It shall also be the base of the text which means it is the unrhymed draft of the text.
Option 3:


It shall comprise with patriotism and identity. The siblings, Sun-hee and Tae- yul would be mistaken for being chin-il-pas. Sun-hee is a good student who does well academically,  evidently she topped her kanji test. Korea and Japan borrowed the system of character writing from China, that's why excelling in kanji did not mean she betrayed her country. However, others think Sun- hee did otherwise.

On the other hand, Tae-yul was resented the Japanese. He joined the Japanese army with a secret mission of going against the Japanese in the middle of of the war. However, others also thought he was a chin-il-pa for helping the Japanese in the war.In both cases, they were mistaken for but did not bother for their love for Korea never faded. The siblings remembered their identities.
Events:
·        Sun-hee called A CHIN-IL-PA·        A false suicide while tae-yul was a kamikaze.
·        Korea was free from the rule of the Japanese.
           Characters:
·         Sun-hee
Physical trait – bangs; short hair; small eyes; thin lips

·         Tae-yul
Physical trait – long nose; short hair; small eyes; fit build

Setting:
·         Classroom
·         Army camp
·         Home