Draft 3, Rhyming text

I topped my kanji test
I think that’s what made me a chin-il-pa
Which my friends detest
My friends laugh at me: ha ha ha

Boys threw pebbles at me and ran
I kept my head down and glanced around
As I heard their chant, “lover of Japan”

I just want their voices to drown

Tae-yul is my brother’s name

He joined the army because he love the planes

And acted in a moment of folly

Abuji and Omoni was disappointed

Then questions followed this decision

Worried if planes collided

Had they known he had his own reason

His plan was failed due to bad weather

His secret plan was voided

So he headed back for a breather

He did not see if Japanese planes collided

To the big boss he was sent,

Preparations were all for nought

And off to jail he went

“I’ve got to get out of here, I ought!”

OR
For failing his mission
he was sent to jail
He had a mission
“I’ll get out of here!”

Korea was finally free from the Japanese
Koreans were all cheering
There is finally going to be peace
Without all the torturing.

Through all this hardship
The siblings were known for betrayal
But it strengthen their kinship
Because of their love for Korea OR for patriotism is final.